Question 5

Liked my colour scheme & the fact my models look directly at the camera, other factors they liked that i might of non mention would of been, ' i like your contents page space out your texts equally ' they liked because it carried on my formal theme,however it was not spaced out equally which may of made it look disorganized and less appealing to my audience.

Audience Feed Back

 

I also took on some of the audience’s feedback such as;

What could I improve?

‘Your DPS seems to be an A4 piece; perhaps you redo it as an A3 with a larger image?;

‘You could improve on the layout of your DPS because the image of Victor (the guy on b      the couch’ with the saxophone) looks a bit stretched horizontally and you could have also made the DPS an A3 sheet or paper instead of an A4 sheet of paper’

 

The audience feedback allowed me to analysis my magazine and to see the features they liked  and also features they may have come across  unclear. I was able to redo parts in order to help attract my  audience however some people stated my audience was clear and certain factor like having a white model did not demine my magazine.

Audience said;

 ‘I think that your Black and white colour scheme will attract potential readers to your magazine even if they’re not a part of your target audience and this is because of the fact that most magazines are really colourful or dark (black colours) and your unique colour scheme will defiantly stand out. You target audience will defiantly be attracted to your music magazine for this reason as well.’

‘By representing Jazz, you are able to attract Jazz fans. It is quite formal; this would be appreciated by the audience.’

 This is positive feedback as the targets I was looking to achieve such as keeping a formality tone in my magazine have been achieved